Lessons in What Makes a Good Story

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“All tales, then, are at some level a journey into the woods to find the missing part of us, to retrieve it and make ourselves whole. Storytelling is as simple – and complex – as that. That’s the pattern. That’s how we tell stories.” ~ John Yorke, Into the Woods: A Five Act Journey Into Story

I love a good story anytime, but winter seems to be the best time to hunker down under a warm throw and catch up on movies and TV shows that I’ve been wanting to watch. Barry and I love binge watching TV series and a few nights ago we started watching Lessons in Chemistry. Monday night we watched two episodes, but Tuesday evenings, Barry has a standing date to join a live MacVoices chat. However, since he only needed to work half a day on Wednesday, he and I sat down in the late afternoon to watch a few more episodes. The show was so engaging that we stayed up late and finished watching the remaining 6 episodes. Barry and I were so impressed with the show that we now want to read the book by Bonnie Garmus the TV show is based upon.

In my opinion, Apple+ has some of the best stories on television and I’m so happy they sponsored Lessons in Chemistry. It’s a story that leaves you feeling good at the end, all about love on lots of different levels. Brie Larson is the star and executive producer. One critic indicated that this story, both the book and the TV series are a kind of a fairy tale about the roles of women in the 1950s and 60s and how the women, both black and white, are idealized in a way that makes us want to be like them. They are extremely intelligent but living in a man’s world and making their dreams come true is quite challenging as any woman knows. The women in the story are the kind of ordinary heroines many women aspire to be. And that’s one thing I like about the show. The characters don’t back down from trying to make their lives and the world a better place. 

Brie’s character, Elizabeth Zott, is a chemist with a Master’s Degree from UCLA, working at Hastings lab. She’s one of the smartest chemists there, but because she doesn’t have a PhD and she’s a woman, she’s a lab assistant making coffee for men who have mediocre talent. The reason she didn’t get her PhD is one of the more disturbing episodes in the series. She’s interested in proving that abiogenesis (DNA) is the building block of life. Deciding she’s not going to let her lack of a PhD stop her, she works after hours on her research, but, of course, when her boss finds out, he belittles her, telling her she’s not a real chemist. Which, of course, is not true. He’s one of the mediocre scientists she works with and he knows it. But working at the lab is Calvin Evans. He is a Nobel Prize nominated chemist, and eventually the two end up working together. And, of course, they fall in love.

One of the things I love about Elizabeth’s character, is that she’s highly logical. When men try to put her in her place, she doesn’t get emotional, she comes back with a logical response that is hard for them to refute, but of course, they are men with the power, so most of the time they get their way.

As the story goes along, her life takes turns that she was not planning on or expecting. She suffers grief, the hardships of being a new mother, who didn’t want to have children in the first place. She struggles with finding a way to make a living after being fired from her job. Eventually, she unexpectedly get’s offered her own cooking show, which highlights her talent for cooking, which she treats as chemistry experiments. She takes a common sense approach to the show using the chemical names as well as the common names for the ingredients for the recipe of the day. The women who attend the live episode, come armed with notebooks and pencils eager to learn. Occasionally during the Q & A segment of the show, Elizabeth has the opportunity to encourage a woman who wants more out of life than to be just a wife and mother. Those moments make her extremely popular.

Another great thing about the show is how Elizabeth’s awareness expands. When she falls in love with Calvin, he introduces her to hobbies not related to chemistry, like rowing and swimming. It’s also interesting that he’s the only white person living in his neighborhood. He moved there because it was just enough miles from work that he could run there every day and get a good workout. He, and eventually Elizabeth develop deeply satisfying relationships with their neighbors. Eventually, Elizabeth learns to be an ally to them in their attempts to save their neighborhood from being turned into a freeway. 

The last endearing thing I want to point out about the show is Elizabeth’s relationship with her 7 year old daughter, Mad. She names her that because when the nurse asks the name of the baby, she says, “I hadn’t thought of a name.” The nurse says, “Just name her what you feel,” to which Elizabeth says, “Mad.” Of course her official name is Madeline, but Elizabeth and even some of their friends call her “Mad” for short. Even though Elizabeth didn’t want to become a mother, and has an extremely rough first few months or even years learning how to take care of her daughter, she becomes a wonderful mother. She pays attention to the things Madeline loves, and how her growing TV fame is affecting her. The one thing she can’t do, though, is talk about Calvin who died before Madeline was born. But Mad tells someone that she misses her father even though she never knew him. 

When Madeline is given the school assignment to build a family tree, she goes on a secret quest to find out as much as she can about her father. Elizabeth has a difficult time talking about him. Her grief is still so present. But when Elizabeth finds out what Mad is doing, her search brings them closer together. Surprising things about his childhood and why he grew up in an orphanage are revealed. The story ends when Elizabeth chooses to take her own advice and go back to her first love and get her PhD in chemistry supported by a large group of loving friends and family. 

This series, like so many I’ve seen on Apple+ left me feeling hopeful about the future. It’s an example of how to deal with the ups and downs of life and one of the vital things we need when we’re faced with really difficult challenges is a strong support system of loving people who encourage us not to settle for anything less than what we really want.

Thanks for reading, liking and commenting. I hope you are enjoying the change of seasons wherever you live in the world.

Blessings,

Lucinda Sage-Midgorden © 2023

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Stories are Better With a Bit of Mystery

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I never really enjoyed writing as a kid. In school, it always felt like work. But after several post-college jobs required me to write, I (ironically) slowly grew to enjoy it. My first unpublished draft came about after doing a team-building exercise for my co-workers that involved writing a story together. 

After that, I realized how much I enjoyed writing fiction, and my first novel ever, Imitation Murder, was born! I really hope you enjoy reading my stories as much as I enjoy writing them, but if you don’t, that’s okay, too.

When I’m not writing, I enjoy: hanging out in the garden; walking the dogs; taking care of my fish; reading mysteries, sci-fi, & YA dystopian novels; and painting. Anything creative, really!

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Interactive books for children:

  The Endless Hike

  Danger on the Slopes

  Deep Sea Disaster

  Arizona Secrets

  Cheyenne Mountain Chaos

  Moab Mystery

  Barcelona Nightmare

Books for Adults

  Imitation Murder

  Wandering Stars

  What Happened to Jade?

  Love Not Found

The Brother Cadfael Series, A Morbid Taste for Bones, first in the series by Ellis Peters

The Space Between Time, Lucinda Sage-Midgorden

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Possible Movies that might be the one Rachael mentioned as her favorite

  Mark of the Vampire (1935) Director, Tod Browning, Screenplay, Guy Endore, plus 5 others      Actors, Lionel Barrymore, Elizabeth Allan, Bela Lugosi, Lionel Atwill

 Crypt of the Vampire (1964) Director, Camilla Mastrocinque, Screenwriter, Tonino Valerii,  Actors, Christopher Lee, Adriana Ames, Ursula Davis, José Campos

  The Castle of the Living Dead, (1964) Director, Warren Kiefer and Luciano Ricci, Screenwriters, Paul Maslansky and 3 others, Actors, Christopher Lee, Gaia Germani, Philippe Leroy

  Theatre of Death, (1967) Director, Samuel Gallu, Screenplay, Ellis Madison, Roger Marshall, Actors, Christopher Lee, Julian Glover, Lelia Goldoni, Jenny Till

Story-Power on Patreon, Apple Subscription 

I’m so passionate about stories that I created the Story-Power podcast, Patreon Community, and Apple subscription so I’d have an excuse to talk story with other story lovers. Patreon is $5 a month for content not found on the Story-Power podcast, or on my Sage Woman Blog. The Apple subscription is $3 a month, again with content not included in the Story-Power podcast. If you’re passionate about stories, and want to talk about what you’ve learned from your favorites, come join me at patreon.com/StoryPower. Or, you can subscribe to the subscription on Apple where Story-Power is published.

PodMatch for Podcasters 

If you are a podcaster, or have a message or fantastic product you want to share with the world, I encourage you to check out PodMatch. I call them a dating service for podcasters. Use the affiliate link and tell them, Lucinda sent you. Then contact me so we can set up a Story-Power chat.

What I’ve Been Up To

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As you know, I’ve had some projects hanging over my head for quite some time. I hope to get them finished by the end of the year. 

I’ve finally gone back to work on my second novel, Time’s Echo and am nearly finished with the rough draft. I’m not sure what inspired me with new ideas and scenes to add, but it feels good to be living life with Jenna and Morgan again.

Almost since I started Story-Power, I’ve wanted to put the episodes up on YouTube, but since I publish the audio only, that meant I had to add some kind of visual to make the episodes compatible. I’m happy to say, I have just finished converting episode 50 and am uploading the latest 5 finished episodes to my channel. It has been rewarding to go back and listen to all the episodes again. My guests have inspired me anew. Creating Story-Power is one of the best things I have ever done in my life. One of the reasons it is so meaningful to me is because each guest is optimistic about what they are doing and how it will have a positive impact on the world. If we only listen to the news, we could get depressed. But there are plenty of people out there who are creating great content and that’s a wonderful thing.

Fall and Winter always feel like a time to hibernate to be quiet and reflect. This year is no different. I’ve gone back to writing in my journal every morning something I had stopped doing. I was inspired by a short YouTube video by Elizabeth Gilbert to pick up my journal again. Also one of my guests reminded me of the value of Morning Pages, that Julia Cameron encourages creatives to do in her famous book, The Artist’s Way. I have to say writing these pages has been quite helpful in keeping me motivated. One thing I realized while writing in my journal was that I put too much on my plate when I published by online course Saving the World One Story at a Time on Ûdemy. So, I have decided to remove it at the end of the year. At some point I will revise it, or use the videos on another platform. But for now, I want to concentrate on Story-Power, growing my Patreon community, and finishing my book.

I did take a leap of faith earlier this month and enter The Space Between Time in the American Legacy Book Awards in two categories. It’s a new award created by The American Book Awards for books that have been published between 2010 and earlier this year. I know it’s not a perfect book, but since I’m nearly finished with Time’s Echo, or at least the rough draft of it, I thought any kind of new exposure for the first book, might help the second.

Barry and I have also been watching some interesting series recently. My favorite is, The Wheel of Time, which is on Amazon Prime. I’ve not read the 14 book series, except the first one. This series is high fantasy, which I’m not always into, but there is something about the characters, their interactions with each other, and the things they discover about themselves that speak to me where I am right now. The premise is that 3000 years before the story begins, The Dark One wanted to take over the world. Magic exists, but only certain men and women are channelers of the One Power. One man, designated as The Dragon, is set to confront and cage The Dark One in a prison. However, something goes wrong and the world is broken. At the beginning of our story, The Wheel has turned, and a new Dragon is reborn to attempt to cage The Dark One again.

Moraine an Aes Sedai,(female channeler) and her Warder (protector), Lan have been searching for The Dragon Reborn for 20 years and in the first episode they find four possibles in a village called The Two Rivers. It’s isolated high in the mountains. The village is attacked and the six of them must escape the monsters to protect their loved ones. A fifth person, the Wisdom, (shaman/healer) of the town tracks them down, and Moraine and Lan discover she is needed by the other four, and an important part of the battles to come.

There are over 2000 named characters in the books, which means it makes the storytelling complicated. Some of the characters must be combined or eliminated. One of my favorite characters is the Ogire, Loial. He’s wise. Moraine and Lan rely on him to guide the group to face The Dark One in what they think will be the last battle. Of course it proves to be only the first one.

In the second season, Loial says one of my favorite quotes. The heroes are fighting the enemy. Some are hesitating, not knowing what to do next and Loial says something like, “We are the heroes of the future. It’s time we started acting like it.” I was inspired by that, because WE are the heroes of the future. What we do today has a huge impact on what happens in the years to come. The future will either be better or worse by what we choose to do in the here and now. If you’re into fantasy, I highly recommend this series. A third season is already in production. I can’t wait to see what happens.

A series that I was looking forward to was Ahsoka, a Star Wars continuation, or maybe one that fills in the blanks between movies. In any case, I have to say, Barry and I were disappointed. It was slow. I didn’t think the plot was constructed very well. The character of Ahsoka seemed flat to me. Who knows where things go wrong in the production of a movie or TV show. I hope, if they do another season, they can fix the characters and storylines. Also, I thought there was too much talk when there should have been action. It just didn’t quite hit the mark for me. I was hoping it would be like another Star Wars fill-in-the-blanks series, Andor, which I thought was fantastic. If you love Star Wars, and haven’t seen that series, you might want to check it out. I think a new season will be airing in the new year. Both of those series are available on Disney +

The third series we just finished watching is an amazing murder mystery taking place over four timelines, with the same dead body appearing in each. The title is, Bodies and it’s available on Netflix. The four detectives discover the same naked body in their timeline in the same lane in London. The man had been shot in the eye, but there is no bullet. There is also a mysterious mark on the body’s wrist that no one can decipher. As the story goes along each detective comes into contact with people who are part of a cabal that was formed beginning in 1890 to “create a better world” which manifests in 2053. To accomplish this “better world”, the villain does what one of my future Story-Power guests calls, The Thanos effect. He destroys London in 2023 to make way for this better world. I loved the visual effects of how the different timelines were connected by blocks of scenes from one timeline juxtaposed next to another timeline. The story is just the kind I love. It’s complex but unfolds in such a way that makes the ending completely satisfying. It’s great storytelling based on the graphic novel written by Si Spencer. I highly recommend it.

Well, that’s all from me for now. I’m off to convert another Story-Power episode and do some work on my novel. Have a great weekend.

Blessings,

Lucinda

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I’m so passionate about stories that I created the Story-Power podcast, Patreon Community, and Apple subscription so I’d have an excuse to talk story with other story lovers. Patreon is $5 a month for content not found on the Story-Power podcast, or on my Sage Woman Blog. The Apple subscription is $3 a month. If you’re passionate about stories, and want to talk about what you’ve learned from your favorites, come join me at patreon.com/StoryPower. Or, you can subscribe to the subscription on Apple where Story-Power is published.

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Characters are the Most Important Part of a Story

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After being medically retired from the Army in 2015, Maccabee’s life has been a rollercoaster of a journey down a road most refuse to travel. Before deciding to become a voice actor, Maccabee was just like everyone else; working to survive and take care of his family. And when God decided to use D&D (Dungeons and Dragons) to inspire him to give acting another chance, he’s never looked back. This journey has given him the chance to record character voices for a short animated film that continues to earn international awards, narrate a television series that has been requested more episodes even before it’s aired, and helped give a voice to small businesses nationwide. This also led him to create his own podcast, Beyond the Pen, to give unknown and newly published authors an international platform to tell people about themselves, their book, and the story behind the story. But most of all it’s allowed him to get back to the basics of storytelling by helping authors and creatives a like develop fully fleshed-out characters, backstories, and world events for their fictional worlds.

Mack’s podcast website with all his social media links: beyondthepenpodcast.com

Mark W. Travis, Director of feature films and TV

The Space Between Time,Lucinda Sage-Midgorden

Story-Power on YouTube

Gemma Germán Story-Power episode 26, “Finding You Niche”

Downton Abbey TV series, (2010 – 2015), Julian Fellowes creator, writer

Sweeney Todd: The Demon Barber of Fleet Street (1982, 2007) Based on the play by Christopher Bond, music and lyrics by Stephen Sondheim

Dracula, Bram Stoker (book)

Foundation, TV series (2021 – ) Isaac Asimov novels, Creators, David S. Goyer, Josh Friedman

Fight Club, (1999) Director, David Fincher, Chuck Palahniuk, novel, Jim Uhls, screenplay

Tom Clancy’s Jack Ryan TV series (2018 – 2023) Based on character by Tom Clancy, Creator, Carlton Cuse and Graham Roland

Beyond the Pen Digital Marketing episode

Emanuel Rose, Digital Marketing Guru on LinkedIn

The Great Cleric, TV series, (2023 – 2023) Director, Masato Tamagawa, Tsukashita Yoshihiro, Hiiro Akikatze, Keiichirô, Keiichirô Ôchi, writers

The Last of the Breed, Louis L’Amour

Sergeant York, (1941), Director, Howard Hawks, Abem Finkel, original screenplay

Rambo, (2008), Director, Sylvester Stallone, Art Monterastelli, screen writer

Miss Saigon: 25th Anniversary, (2016), Director, Brett Sullivan, Alain Boublil and Claude-Michel Schonberg, writers

Hacksaw Ridge, (2016), Director, Mel Gibson, Robert Schenkkan, screenplay

Saving Private Ryan, (1998), Director, Steven Spielberg, Robert Rodat, screenplay

Hudson Hawk, (1991), Director, Michael Lehmann, Steven E. deSouza, screenplay

Story-Power on Patreon

I’m so passionate about stories that I created the Story-Power podcast, Patreon Community, and Apple subscription so I’d have an excuse to talk story with other story lovers. It’s $5 a month for content not found on the Story-Power podcast, or on my Sage Woman Blog. If you’re passionate about stories, and want to talk about what you’ve learned from your favorites, come join me at patreon.com/StoryPower

PodMatch

If you are a podcaster, or have a message or fantastic product you want to share with the world, I encourage you to check out PodMatch. I call them a dating service for podcasters. Use the affiliate link and tell them, Lucinda sent you. Then contact me so we can set up a Story-Power chat.

Nature vs Nurture, Birth Family vs Adoption

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Adopted at birth, Edward Di Gangi was born and raised in New York City. Although he knew for most of his life that he was adopted, it wasn’t until he approached his seventieth birthday that he began to search for the identity of his birth mother. His journey and the many surprising discoveries he made as he searched are recounted in his memoir, The Gift Best Given.

Edward and his wife now live in Hillsborough, North Carolina. He is a popular book club presenter and podcast guest. The Gift Best Given is his first full-length book.

Edward’s Social Media links:

www.digangiauthor.com

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Story-Power on Patreon

I’m so passionate about stories that I created the Story-Power podcast, Patreon Community, and Apple subscription so I’d have an excuse to talk story with other story lovers. If you’re passionate about stories too, and want to talk about what you’ve learned from your favorites, come join me at patreon.com/StoryPower.

PodMatch

If you are a podcaster, or have a message or fantastic product you want to share with the world, I encourage you to check out PodMatch. I call them a dating service for podcasters. Use the affiliate link and tell them, Lucinda sent you. Then contact me so we can set up a Story-Power chat.